The wind is howling through the dark woods
I feel fear
The woods’ tree tops swirling around covering the sky
I feel relaxed
The sky is still, with a few fluffy clouds on top
I feel free
The clouds move as the seasons pass
I feel inspired
The flowers are as beautiful as the mushroom
I feel hopeful
And I, I am just a little girl observing the beauty of nature
I feel alive
7 comments:
I really like the repetition when you used "I feel fear" or "I feel relaxed". It adds a lot to the flow of the writing.
I really like the repetition when you used "I feel fear" or "I feel relaxed". It adds a lot to the flow of the writing.
I totally agree! Nature is so pretty. I like how you use some reptition and descriptive words. Does nature inspire you?
I totally agree! Nature is so pretty. I like how you use some reptition and descriptive words. Does nature inspire you?
I really love this. I feel the exact same way when I am in the woods. There is so many different feelings you get. When I want to go on an adventure, I go to the woods, when I want to read, I go to the woods, and when I want to even be sad, I go to the woods. It's just a magical place. What is your favorite thing to do in the woods?
I love this small little poem. It expresses the great things about nature and how important it is. I love how you did, "I feel fear", "I feel relaxed", etc, and related it to your own thoughts.
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