Her name? No. No she does not have a name. She was not given a name, most likely she doesn’t deserve a name. Why is she here? No one knowns. But for now let’s leave her as.. skinless… boneless… hardly even there. Do you get the image?
Miss skinless, sits everyday in the same place, she goes unnoticed. Her scarf overflowing her petite coat. Her boot cuffs topple over her jeans. She doesn’t ever change. She is always the same. Most of her spectators like it that way.
Her face is forgettable. The only way I can describe it is that it is the most bland, most boring, most expected thing ever. If you were to spot this sight you would easily forget her. She wears the same thing and does almost nothing. I have seen her everyday of my life and still I forget her. Miss boneless has no emotion painting her face, but her eyes tell a different story. They show that of a frightened child, lying through her teeth every second she speaks. She never changes.
Why do people notice her? Because it’s the only stable thing in there quaint town. Everyday she sits there, staring, while everyone else is stressing and bustling. She goes unnoticed most the time, but to those who pay attention, you will see her.
Go outside, take a moment and look for her. She will be there.
8 comments:
I like the mystery of this piece, it shows how something can be somewhere but you don’t see it until you look specifically for it. Great writing!
This reminds me of that song by Maroon 5 called “She Will be Loved”
I really like this. I feel like some people see themselves as the character portrayed here. I love this
I really like this piece of writing, its interesting how you de-humanized this mysterious women to make people interested in her personality. Great Writing!
I think that it is not okay for someone to be unnoticed and constantly forgotten. Sadly it is something that happens and we can do something about it, but we choose not to.
This is awesome! But you used the wrong there... "Because it’s the only stable thing in there quaint town." So um... yep. I liked it :)
This is both creepy and interesting. I love the story it tells, and I'm sure people can relate to it. Great job!
This was written really well! I like how you made the women seem less human. It's kind of sad that she is constantly forgotten and unnoticed.
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