I got off the sidewalk by the middle school and started walking on the back road because is was faster than the main road. Walking down the street was relaxing because there was no one else around to distract me. Of course there was always the occasional car engine or dog barking, but for the most part it was quiet. Since it was quiet I could get lost in my thoughts very easily. I liked to sing songs in my head, to pass the time.
While walking you come across many different things. There are different trees, houses, cars, and people. I was walking and I came across this creepy looking house. The wood on the outside was rotting and turning black, the chain link fence in front was rusting, all of the grass had died. It was pretty creepy. On the street level there was a short, long bush. All of the leaves on it were still growing really well so it look weird in front of the house. As I walk next to the bush I heard rustling.
Right as I heard it I stopped right in my tracks. I looked at the bush, but I couldn't see anything in it because it was so heavily leafed. I started to walk, but a little slower this time. I moved a little farther when I heard it again. This time instead of stopping, I sped up a little bit. As I walked a little faster the noise started to follow me. I didn't know what to do. I was almost at a slow jog by now. The noise would not go away. I could see the end of the bush now so I knew I would know what is was soon.
To Be Continued...............................................................................
6 comments:
Ahhhhhh!!!!!! What was it?!?!
Great build up of suspense! I was a little confused - was the bush following you? Or was it one of those long shrubs that make a sort of wall?
I love the way you built the suspense, can't wait to see what happened next.
I do agree with you guys the suspense. I was also a little confused about the brush and whatever it was doing. This story reminded me a lot of the movie “IT.” Great job.
I love how your described the house! I can’t wait to see what happens!!!
Love this! But yeah, I felt like the bush was following you too.
It was the thing in the bush that was following we, not the bush.
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