Sunday, October 16, 2016

Eyes Through the Trees

"Help!" A strange voice shouts from the woods.
Emma perks her ears up and she sprints into the thicket to where she thinks the voice is coming from. Nothing.
"Help!!" The voice screams from the other side of the grove.
Emma dashes there and looks around frantically. She sees nothing, hears nothing, and smells nothing. "Help! Help! Help!" The voice repeats again, this time with more panic raising in it.
Emma hears soft footfalls behind her and quickly spins around. She is face to face with Krane and his knife.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

oh no!!! did he killed her?? tell us more!

Mrs Invisible said...

I love this story, but I can't wait to the next chapter, when??

Sara GC said...

Ahhhhh! Is Krane her friend, going with her to help the person shouting? Or is he threatening Emma too? Please write more and explain!

Anonymous said...

I am going to be posting the next - first chapter, when I finish chapter two. I will post every time I finish two chapters. I am almost finished with chapter two. It might take me up to three weeks to publish my next chapters (first two plus a prologue). I am hoping that it only takes me two or even one week until I publish.

Anonymous said...

Good suspense, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Anonymous said...

Wow, good suspense. What will happen next? Please write more!

Anonymous said...

I deffintly write more, but you might have to wait a while until you get to get the rest of this story.

Anonymous said...

Wow! So much suspense. What happens next?

Anonymous said...

Thanks for leaving me hanging. Very good choice of words. Very suspenseful.

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