Monday, October 17, 2016

The Forest

"Turn down the music!" Yelled my mom as I was jamming to my favorite sound track. My life is better with music. It took all the stress that built up from high school away. I turned down the music one notch just to annoy my parents, but it backfired. "Teresa Lee Thompson, come here right now! Turn off the music and bring your homework with you!" When my mom said my name like that, it meant I was in trouble. I went down stairs and my mom just stared at me like moms stare to make you do something. I sat down and started my homework. My calculus problem was working itself out in my head when I got bored of homework. I planned to go to the park with my five friends right then.

When I got to the park, my friends were waiting at the bench by the murky pond. We love to play frisbee, so we took out Lauren's light up disc, and started to play with it. My five friends and I playing frisbee at the park on a beautiful day, was all I wanted to happen. To hear my name being called out as well as calling out my friends names.

Lauren, Dani, Amber, Alex, Connor, and I are the dorks of the school. The popular people are mean and we don't understand why they are so popular. All they do is dab and bottle flip. I don't get it. The names of the three most popular girls at Adams High school are Jessica, Bree, and Taylor. They always give me the stink eye.

 The park that we were playing frisbee at, is right by a forest that nobody goes into.
"Teresa!" I heard Lauren scream. I looked over, and her frisbee was about to crash into my face. I ducked just in time, but it flew and tumbled into the forest behind me. The rule was that if you dropped the frisbee or they were passing it to you, you had to get it. So now it was my turn. The forest is the creepiest thing in town.

I summoned all of my courage, and stepped into the forest. Immedialty after I am inside, I feel a chill racing down my back. It was like all noise from the outside world had been blocked, and all I can hear is the echoing chirp of a bird, and a faint hiss. It feels like the jungle. The huge trees towering over me like giants trying to step on me. I heard another noise, but this time it was Dani, "Teresa?" But all I can focus on were these voices, kind of like whispers, that were all in my head. At least I think so. I saw this faint blue light in the near distance, but the sun seemed to be setting faster and faster. I had to hurry. The voices in my head were getting very loud, so I sprinted. I grabbed the frisbee, and ran. Suddenly, I felt a hand grab my leg and I screamed as loud as I could.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow! this story is compelling, but what happened afterwards?? we need more!...

Anonymous said...

Love this story. I agree in need to know what happens next. Laughed out loud about the dab and bottle flip.

Anonymous said...

Great writing, I hope you keep going, I want to know what happens.

Sara GC said...

I like your explanation of the tensions between the popular kids and the dorks. You do a great job of describing this. I have great news for you: the dorks are the ones who rule the world after graduation. Think about all of the amazing inventions, entertainment and art that influences us --- this is ALL made by the people who were the dorks in school! Isn't that a relief?

Mrs Invisible said...

Great story, but definitely need to know what happens afterwrards! Please keep writing I love it!!! :)

Anonymous said...

I would love to know what happpens next! Does she die? What do her friends do?!

Anonymous said...

Very interesting story, but what comes next. I also thought the dab and bottle flip part was funny. :)

Anonymous said...

Very cool and interesting... I love it!

Anonymous said...

I will continue this story very soon.

Anonymous said...

This post is really fantastic! I can't believe you left us with that cliffhanger though. Please write more over the summer!

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