Monday, May 8, 2017

Adventure, The adventure begins

A young infant sat alone in an old, unstable, basket. This young child was abandoned... no name, no home, and no love. It didn't cry though... no screaming, no whining, no crying. Soon someone found the child, and didn't take it in.

This isn't a fairytale.

This person, Samantha Smith, notified the police and left. The police arrived and took the child to an orphanage where they took her in.

It had been ten years since that fateful night on the streets. Ten years old, almost eleven. The child, Kristine, had been adopted multiple times. First, there was the  Thompsons, who fought constantly about her until finally giving her up. Then, there were the Weavers, who despised her, because as soon as she showed up, they had nothing but bad luck. Now she lives with the Thomases ,who are kind and loving, but since Kristine has had such a hard past, she has a hard time trusting her new family.

Kristine sat in her room after being sent home from school early because she was suspended which was the third time this month. Her parents were very upset with her, but understood and so did the school. That is why they continued to let her go to school there. When her parents got home they spoke to her, "Kristine we are very concerned about you. We—"

There was a large crash. Then there was long silence.

Sirens sounded. There was screaming and fighting. Kristine ran. She ran far and fast until she couldn't run anymore. She didn't know what happened; all she knew was her dad yelled run and so she did. When she finally stopped she was outside the city, she was scared and confused. Something happened, something bad but she didn't know what. She heard a voice; the voice came from an old man in strange clothes. The man said, "Kristine you need to go. You will die if you don't." Kristine asked, "Who are you? Why would I die and where will I go?" The man just stared for a moment then informed Kristine that she was his granddaughter and that she could trust him. He let her know that
there was a sanctuary two miles south of here and they would accept her there.

So she set off on an adventure that was about to begin.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

That went from 1-100 very quickly. Nothing like that has ever happened to me, so I don't know if this happens in real life. Why did her Grandfather go to get her just now?

Ajax Attack said...

G vhjbhljjljhguoh that was so good that I had a little space attack. Tynenrthrty. Sorry had another one. Thanks for this great story!!

Anonymous said...

That was very intriguing! It started off slow, then the crash happened. I hope you write more of this, it is really good. What gave you the idea?

Anonymous said...

Sooooo good It would be great if you made more I would definitely read it! 👏👏👍😄

Anonymous said...

Great story in general and I loved the idea behind it. However, she doesn't trust her family and has had a bad history, but still trusts a random stranger saying he's her grandfather. He is definitely not her grandfather.

Anonymous said...

I lobe the details! Great job!

Anonymous said...

I love how the story starts off slow and then really gets interesting

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