My father's grave up on that hill
Could have never been that still
My heart there skipped a beat
That moment yet, so bitter-sweet
Then up in the sky
My father's face did pry
He said,"My child, do not be discouraged
For I give thee COURAGE
19 comments:
This poem is really beautiful. I like the ryhme, and the uplifting, yet depressing theme.
I love your word choice in this poem. I can feel your pain, but yours is probably a lot worse than mine.
Haha thanks for all the love. Just so you know it's not a real story.
This was so deep and I just really love how you brought back what the father said. Can't wait to read more of your works!!
I love the word choice in this poem! It was great.
Although short, this was very beautiful and packed a lot of emotion. This made me think of many questions about the background and who the characters are. Awesome job!
I love how you can take a little poem and put so much meaning into it! I would do anything to be able to do that! I guess I should get working on that! 🤣🤣🤓👍🏼
Wow, even though this is short is still puts a lot of easy understanding. I hope that my dad does not die when i am this you...nor my mom!😲😣😞
Very short and sweet! I like ithis story and the title fits.
It was short but that is all you need if it has meaning. Which it does and lots of it! That was a great poem. It was sad, but also mirthful.
I love your word choice in this it really made this fabulous.
The word choice is perfect. Good work.
The dad may just now be a ghost.
Love this poem
Great rhymes and flow not to mention it was deep
Wow this is amazing and I love the rhymes! I don't know why, but I love the word courage😂 Great word choice! "Thee"
I like the rhymes in this. Keep it up. This would be a really cool lounge story. Good job
amazing
It was depressing at first. And it became uplifting. Most of these are always hitting the feels. Great work.
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