Nothing to do
All alone for there is nothing
Only darkness with a flash of light in the distance
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Alone, nothing to see, hear, smell Nothing to do All alone for there is nothing Only darkness with a flash of light in the distance
13 comments:
Great job! Although short, I could really feel the despair you were taking about.
This is so descriptive. It is almost as if you have almost as if you have felt complete despair before. I haven't. What inspired you to write this piece?
I love how you packed so much into this tiny punch. It is so deep, but only four lines long.
I think this leaves a different image or tone for each reader. It can be related to other things and the options are endless. Good job!
Short and sweat. it was great.
Even though this was very short it portrayed being alone very well.
This is so small but so powerful. I love the picture!!
This is so short, yet means so much. I really would like to know the backstory to this, and the chain of events which led up to this moment of complete despair.
Wow this is great. It is so cool. Like damn. I love how simple this is and deep. And it sort of provides its own atopry for the reader. It's really great. Nice job.
It is very short, but there can be so many possibilities what that flashlight can be. God job!
I love how this is really simple but deep and powerful
Short, but deep. Very inhancing and cool! I like the pic too!
I loved the last line
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