I recently found an old photograph of my sweet little puppy; it was the day after we got her. She was tiny enough to fit under the coffee table in the main living room. She would have her tennis ball, just laying there and enjoying the attention she was getting. I never really understood the value of her life and how much she made mine better. Until she wasn't there........
She wasn't there to brighten my day,
Welcome me home from a crappy day of school,
To keep me warm and take up most of my bed,
To run with,
To cuddle with,
To enjoy the moment with.
Now all I have is her toys, pictures of my sweet little bear cub, and the life-lines that I cling to.
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I remember… when we camped out in the living room and set up all of the collectible trains on Christmas Day and called road call every ti...
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May 4, 2017 I woke up this morning to my favorite type of day, dark, cold, and rainy. I got out of my bed with the help of music by My Ch...
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Alone, nothing to see, hear, smell Nothing to do All alone for there is nothing Only darkness with a flash of light in the distance
15 comments:
This is really beautiful. I oiked how you did the uniqu spacing, and how you wrote about something personal, and something that I, myself can relate to.
This is a very sweet story. I'm sure that's a very lucky dog!
This was beautiful! It really expressed the pain.
Reading this made me really nostalgic of my old dog I used to have. I love the emotions this brought out!
Wow, that was really good! Its simplicity is amazing. I think to write a sad story simply takes a lot of skill as a writer. You've done exactly this.
This is so sad and beautiful. I can tell you wrote it straight from your heart. I once had a puppy that live freely in my Ranch, until one day we found out he had liver cancer and it was too late to save him.
Oh my GORD THIGHS!!!! This was so sad! I actually started crying.
I almost started to cry reading this it was really good and expressed a lot of emotion and connection to the dog.
This really touched me because I have lost dogs before and it hurts.
I know this feeling, I've lost my dog, and it's a horrible feeling. This really touched my heart! Awesome job!!
This is astounding, abslutly beautiful and it is so true. I know how it feels. I've lost my dog before.
That was very sad, but in a good way. It shows that you can write super well. I love dogs as well and I have lost my dog before. Keep writing great things!
I love dogs and i know how you feel i've lost my dog before and brought alot of emotions to suface
This actually made me shed a tear. This is so sad and a beautiful piece of writing. I lost my dog that I had my whole life last year😭😪
I am yet to lose a dog and i still know how it feels. Because I've lost family, and dogs can be close as family or more.
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