My thoughts start to whirl together, and my brain turns into its subconscious state as I think of the one I lost. The one I never thought I would lose. That one person I could trust, love and care for.
But now she's gone for good.
One instant she's there and the next, she's not. Forever gone, swept away by the light of life, and replaced by the darkness of death.
Her voice fades from my memory, never to be heard again. Her smile, never to be seen again. Her hand, never to be held again.
She never deserved what she got.
And here she is, not alive, but beneath my feet. I look at the headstone, engraved with her name and death date.
I slowly shrivel up inside, holding on to what I have left. But I don't have anything to hold, because she won't be coming back. My heart is broken, torn to pieces, aching for one last sight of her, but this time no bandaid can fix it, for she is gone.
Gone for good.
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10 comments:
Wow, that was really good. I love the way you really expressed emotion.
Jesus Christ on a bicycle. This is deep. Personally I had to deal with death at an early age. I know that I ask this often, but why did you decide to write this?
Wow. How well did you know the person? Did this happen in real life? What would you do if that happened in real life?
Good in ya for hitting us readers with the feels. Not every writer starting out can do that, or even experienced writers.
This is really deep, and really good! This reminded me of a book that I just recently read! Great job.
This is so deep. I love this. I love your word choice and the way you explained everything! This was so good.
This is amazing! My favorite part is when you said "the light of life, and darkness of death". Great job!
You wrote this so well. It really expressed the pain of this unfortunate event.
You describe really well what it's like to loose someone close to you. Great job!
This really explained so much emotion, and love for "her". I almost feel like I was the person at the grave,
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