Tuesday, May 16, 2017
Her Destiny
She never realized growing up, that this would be her future. Never did she ever imagine this. How had it turned into this? How did it get so bad? She lived everyday in her own nightmare. How could she be blinded by hate? No one ever expected this, but it was her destiny. The pull of the trigger changed her life. Everything she had ever known was now no more. With an orange jumpsuit she sat, stripes all across her body. Bars blocked her escape. What's unimaginable to some, is now her life. And, it was once unimaginable to her and the people around her. Reality has been a shock, but that's what you get for breaking the law. Good or bad, she still did it. She saved many by destroying one. She just couldn't save herself.
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13 comments:
Wow. Did she murder someone? Cause that was the vibe I was receiving. If she did. Why did she have to do it? At the beginning I believed that she'd killed herself. But if she had, she won't be able to be in the clink. Hmm. This is an interesting thought experiment though. Would killing one person to save others be worth it? What if you knew the person you had to obliterate? To save people you didn't? Also. Would you kill yourself to save your friends, even if they never knew what you executed? And they merely thought that you were being selfish and didn't think about them. This was a good story, but how did you conceive of it?
Wow, great job! This was written so well. It leaves so many questions in your head, of who was she, why did she save people by killing the person, and who the person was.
I love this. Great job.
This is really deep but really cool
Deep into the sea, but with a touch of sweetness.
Wow! That was very deap and short
Was she murdered, or did she murder someone else?? That was thrilling and kept me in my toes! Please write more!
This is insanely good! I like it when you compare other people's thoughts to the situation at hand.
Wow! Nice job! It was very deep. Very trilling. Geat job!
This is amazing, it really got me on my toes. Now my only question is did she kill someone or was she killed. I'm getting more of a vibe that she was the murderer of this, but only the writer knows for sure.
Wow! I liked how you kept up in the dark until the very end! I really HAD to keep reading! Great job!
Wow!! That's amazing but sad. Suicide. Amazing way to go.
I know a lot of you have asked if she murdered someone, someone murdered her, or suicide. She killed someone.
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