set up all of the collectible trains on Christmas Day and
called road call every time we got in the car and
went to the ice cream shop just down the road and
we made flapjacks in the shape of our names and
had fun every time I was at your house and
you never told me you were going to leave me
that one day in September
Love You, Grandpa
19 comments:
Wow. That was pretty sad. I'm really sorry about your loss. Your grandfather seems like an amazing soul! What memories do you have of him today? Do you have a photograph of him that you could append to this? That would be so swell! How honorable of a bound did you and your grandfather have? Do you really conceive that there is rebirth? If so, what do you imagine your grandpa will come back as?
What a lovely memoir(I could totally be using this wrong) type thing. I wonder what kind of man he was now.
That's sad, but definitely some great memories you've had with you grandpa.
Nice job, you really packed a lot of emotion in a short poem.
I'm sorry for your loss. I love the end of this letter because it really ties it together and it made me think hard. Good job.
My grandpa sadly died too! But I love how you made the story jump to the next line.
Aww, this story is so sad! How long ago did it happen?
This is very sad! I'm sorry for your loss. The way you went from line to line with memories was very meaningful!
I can tell that you had a deep connection with your grandfather. I am very sorry for you loss.
Wow! Waht a great memory! I can tell you and your grandfather were close. Sorry for your loss. Now I'm sad.
Wow! I love how you had all the happy times. That was emotionally it also was a great poem. Keep writing!
This made me think of my childhood memories and how hard it will be when I lose my grandfather. I really liked this piece because it gave me a wonderful image of your past.
That's sad but you have great memories
I love this. It is so cool and simple. I really like how simple this is and how it tells its own a story to the reader. Great job!
Thats sad but at least you had some great memories with him
This is so short, but so full of emotion! Awesome job!
Im so proud of you spreading out your genres. I love this post so much it's really heartfelt.
Love the emotion
It was so happy. But out of nowhere it just dropped. It was an unexpected thing. I'm sorry for the loss.
Post a Comment