*Authors note*
Alright. So I got this from a really happy picture. But my brain was just like - hahaha. No. Happy? Haha. That's funny. No. We must make it sad. How? Oohhh like this. Let's make the picture hell!! Weeeee! - Why brain? Why??!!
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Must be Hell
The light. I can see it. I can see it at the end. Is this death? I feel nothing. I see nothing. Nothing but the light. *sigh* I wish to touch it. I wish to hold it. I wish to be it. This must be hell. I'm not moving any closer. What have I done to offend you God? Do I really deserve this? Must sit. Must stop. To tired. Can't stop. Can't sleep. This. Must. Be. Hell.
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22 comments:
That's great. This reminds me a S-C-H-O-O-L way to much. Fantastic job!
Of course you did! My brain would automatically go to that too!
That authors note really made me laugh because I do the same thing.
I like the way you decided to write this story. And I also like how you put an authors note! Great job!
Thanks guys!
I really enjoyed the imagery of the light and how well you explained how horrible it was.
I like the authors note. And I like the way you wrote it, good job
Wow! Also like the humorous authours note at the end. Iit really helped lift the mood of this depressing story.
Awesome note at the end, it made me smile because that's exactly what I do!
Thanks Gray and Emily R. Winter! That picture was really happy though. And my brain just turned it into something completely different.
This is great. I like how you were basically able to change the meaning of picture a create a wodeful story and it is well put together. Great story.
At least you put in the author's notes.
It was really good
The writing was deep and draws the reader in and is very intriguing. Then there's the authors note, lightening things up and making the reader giggle a little. Together they were pretty neat.
Nice! It is funny to think that this came from a happy picture, thanks for including that little note by the way, insight is always pleasing. Great work!
Damn this i good!
That was a great piece of writing! It was so deep and sad, but a t the same time happy. Keep writing things like that.
Amazing and it almost sounds like a song.
Also my brain dose the same thing.
Haha this is great! I love the authors note😂😂😂 my brain is the same!😂😂
That ending was a brain check for me.
i love the authors note. ha
Good job.
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