1870-1949
Rose Fitzpatrick
I wonder what her story is. She must have been a lovely lady. Her life must have been hard when she lost her brother Thomas back in 1920. They were the bestest of friends. She lived on and missed him every day. She never "got over it", but she lived on. Her life was rough and then she met a wonderful man. They spontaneously fell in love. It was an instant bond. A hint of love that could not be broken. They lived a very joyous life together.
One day, Rose got very ill. They urgently rushed to the hospital and got horrific news. Rose only had one year left until she would no longer live. They lived that last year together as best as they could. They spent it like they did as teens, gazing into each other's eyes.
The day had come. Rose was gone. Gone. The word didn't seem true, but it was. Jack, her husband, couldn't bear life without her. He missed her so dearly. Each day Jack would bring a rose to her gravestone and talk with her. Jack was happy that she was in a better place now, probably running in fields of flowers. They were her favorite after all. He was happy that she no longer had to feel pain. A brilliant life they lived and will soon have a new life together in the fields of paradise.
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10 comments:
It's very unique how you assumed things about a character that you knew nothing about. Very good writing!
I really liked how it seemed that you used the actual graves from the graveyard. It was very sad, but I liked how real it was.
This was very sad, but I like it. I'm guessing this was from when visited the grave. Am I right
"The bestest" I liked your enthusiasm for writing this oddly happily-sad story.
I love how you made up a story, for a probably long forgotten person. I love how they fell in love. Thanks you for writing this wonderful piece of well, writing.
The fact that this has a 0.5 out of 100 chance for being a real story.
I loved how you used the dates in it. Did you get inspiration from the graveyard?
I love the ending! This is also really sad though! Awesome job!!
If I didn't know where the writing came from, you could still make it obvious. Nice short post.
Thanks people!! Yes it was from the graveyard
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