Tuesday, May 16, 2017

The creature from somewhere else

     It sat alone and silent. I walked close to it, as I did I realized it had no face. I was terrified it was going to try something, maybe it would kill me, but nothing happened. It just stared, looked at me as if it could see me, maybe it had some strange sense I could not even fathom in my mind, or maybe it could hear me. I don't know. I reached out to touch it, but it moved away. Was it scared? I wasn't sure if I should just leave, or if I should just stand there and stare at the horrifying beast. It was dark and tall, it almost looked like a shadow, a deformed and melted shadow. I decided to leave the cabin I had found in the woods all those years ago, and now I was back.

     I was only fifteen when I first saw that thing. People said I was crazy, maybe I was, but I was determined to prove otherwise. So I brought a group of my closest friends, with cameras and flash lights. When we arrived, my friends were in shock that I didn't lie about the cabin. They were still skeptical about the whole monster thing, but we were here, and I was ready to prove to them I wasn't crazy.

     We walked into the cabin; it was darker than I remembered. Were we in the right place? was I crazy after all? did the whole thing just play out in my head? No, that couldn't be, I refused to believe it. Then, I saw it the creature from all those years ago. I had a sense of terror, but also happiness like I had befriended the beast I was so terrified of when I was young. We filmed it, we stayed for a while, my friends had the same first reaction to it as I did, but for me it was different, I felt it's happiness like it was excited  to know me again, to know I came back.

I felt I had a friend a true friend, but one that wasn't from this place called Earth.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great job! I think this is a great build up to a long story.

Anonymous said...

I think that if another writer would have written this story, they would have made the character scared of the beast. I am curious of what you will do with this seed.

Grace Marie said...

Demons?

Anonymous said...

The main character gives out a feeling of loneliness to have made friends with something out of this world.

Anonymous said...

The buildup was amazing, and I loved reading and wanted to keep going forever. Please make more!

Anonymous said...

This is a great build up to the story. The main character is very loney and it is sad.

Anonymous said...

This is amazing! The change of emotions was really interesting, and almost reminded me of Dark the were, and golden eyed. Great job!

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