Pompous Brows
Sharp Upturned Nose
Jet Black Suit
Matched For His
Stone Face
This Was The
Day
Filled With Regret
The Day I
Laughed
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I remember… when we camped out in the living room and set up all of the collectible trains on Christmas Day and called road call every ti...
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May 4, 2017 I woke up this morning to my favorite type of day, dark, cold, and rainy. I got out of my bed with the help of music by My Ch...
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Alone, nothing to see, hear, smell Nothing to do All alone for there is nothing Only darkness with a flash of light in the distance
17 comments:
This made me imagine Judge Judy somehow... anyways I loved the writing format.
I live how you described what his face looked like! It created an amazing picture in my head. But why do you regret laughing? I like how you spaced your writing.
Yeah. Why do you regret laughing? I like the way you spaced it, but it did make it harder to follow.
I regret laughing. Probably not for the same thing. I always regret laughing because I snort when I laugh. Keep it up!
Wow this is great!😂 Did you mean that you laughed while in a court room?
If I ever start a band (you're never to old to start a band, right?!) I'm going to call it "Pompous Brows".
What do you think? @Volpe @Cassade States
I really liked your vocabulary in this poem, along with the spacing. It makes me think of some people I know.
Cool!👏👏😎😎
Holly cannoli! This is quite nifty, if I do say so myself😂👏
I really like this writing, and the layout of this writing! Nice job.
I love the layout. Did you laugh in the courtroom? And I agree, I thought of judge Judy when I saw the title. Ha
I thought of Judge Judy, which is the most popular thing to say, but I did think of her. Why did you laugh in the courtroom though?
I too thought of Judge Judy, but why laughing?
This was super cool how you arranged your words very unique
I really don't get this at all, but I like how you place the sentences!
Loved the sentence structure
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