You sit in your seat writing about a woman who saved humanity, but her partner gets all the attention, when you hear a loud Beep ringing in your ear. You look up to see the lockdown light flashing. All the kids in the class move slowly to a corner without a care of what is going on. When you sit down on the cold stone floor, instead of the kids taking it seriously you hear people talking and laughing.
While sitting on the floor, one of the students says, "We should've locked Mrs. K out of the room." The whole class, but you, starts laughing at that comment.
You sit there for a good five minutes when you hear the doorknob move. All your classmates start to get up thinking it was the principal coming to tell them that it was all a drill, when the door opens and a man dressed in black steps and starts to shoot.
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19 comments:
Woah. That was just. Woah. Kids can be really stupid sometimes.
This is what I'm afraid of every time my class and I do a drill like this! People not realizing the seriousness of the situation! I think we should tell people about a drill before we do them, so this stuff can't happen! Awesome wright!
What a scary situation! Kids have started to get used to that drill! Great write!
Wow, I can see this actually happening. Scary. No one expects that this could happen to them, but it's entirely way to possible.
Wow this could be really scary. This reminds me of the Columbine shooting a few years back.
Wow, I can see this happening because nowadays people do not take any of the drills seriously
This is great! I always wonder if this will happen to me next time the alarms go off.
I feel very emotional after reading this. We do drill so often that we have come to think it is just a drill, but one day it may not be. I love that you brought this to life in this story.
This reminds me of what happened at a school a long time ago and about 37kids and teachers ere shot a killed. We have lock downs do a reason, but nobody respects that. Great story.
Shoot, this probably actually happened in a school shooting.
Damn. Harsh and fowl but oddly pleasing. I like that it shows detail and simplicity art the same time. I like that you've taken a different approach on drills and shootings. Now sadly, this has probably already happened but hey, what can you do. Anyway, like i said; it is relay goo. Great job.
I can feel the tense feelings just by reading the story. I can't imagine actually being in this situation. Great job!
That was tense. When I read it I had these really weird chills. I'd love to read more of your writings.
Hahahahah so me. But for real who dose that! It's serious 😵You could die.
Why do people never take those seriously? They simulate life-or-death situations. That's why I play dead on the floor until it's over.
Wow! That is so true that kids just talk when it is a lock down. Thanks for bringing attention to that problem. I love how you wrote this.
Oh my god! Thank you. Some people really don't know the urgency of those situations. Like my god, stop giggling, you ARE GOING TO DIE IN A REAL SHOOTING. Sorry if I seem insensitive towards this scenario, but I just want people to be quiets they don't get shot.
That's so sad. That's probably how some shootings happened. Whenever I think of school shootings, I think of the shooting at Columbine High School. I watched that movie "I Am Not Ashamed". It was one of the hardest movies I've ever seen. It's so...deep. That girl really made the world think. Why would you let yourself get shot when you could deny God? How could you not think that there was an intimate relationship between that person and her faith for her to die for her beliefs. Why would you die for something that isn't real? I know I wouldn't. I'd be sure before I died like that. I am sure about myself. God is real to me.
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