Lovely birds singing
Beautiful trees swaying
Comforting wind blowing
Smelly flowers blooming
-what if-
Small grass tickling
Little bugs flying
-is our imagination-
-and-
Horrible creatures howling
Dark stalkers stalking
-is the truth-
Murderous monsters hiding
Captured souls dying
-beyond our lies-
-but-
Peaceful graves to evil below
Blue sky to fiery atmosphere
Cheerful friends to posing demons
Fluttering leaves to remains of before
-who knows?-
10 comments:
This was really good. I really injoyed how the words flowed together.
I like how you compared the good to the bad in the last paragraph! Very creative!
It started out all happy and then it changed. I love the contrast! It was a great piece of writing.
I really enjoyed the flow of this. It made me feel a lot of emotions all at once. Was this how you felt when you were sitting in the graveyard.
This really confused me, but it was also intruiging. I liked the contrast, and it really made me question reality.
Made me question reality...
Wow! I truly love this. It's so simple and i love that it is separated by the little tittle type things. Great job!
You had a great flow and it was such an amazing poem.
Wow this is really beautiful. I love the interrupting words in between. Was this the graveyard writing?
full of mystery, good job
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