Monday, February 6, 2017
A Beautiful Place
I am trapped in this endless world that seems to go on forever. I was born into this place of beauty and horror. Nobody can see or hear this place but me. This world can be an bottomless void, a beautiful world, or a cage that you can not escape. This discreet corner is no ordinary place. It is a world that strange things happen. It is a place where you can stay and not come out. For me, this is a place of imagination, ideas, and thoughts. This wonderful place is my mind.
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6 comments:
Very vivid descriptions, I wonder what this would look like in poem format. *hint hint, nudge nudge.*
I really liked how you ended it. Why can only they see the world?
That was an amazing ending! I was thinking it was maybe like a war zone or something before you said it was your mind. This was a great piece of writing.
I enjoyed how you led up to your ending. What a great finish! Your mind is obviously a fantastic place to spend some time.
This is a wonderful artistic interpretation of the mind and imagination. I found it pretty relatable in a lot of ways. Good job!
I really love this, the ending is great! It would be cool to see more like it.
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