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I remember… when we camped out in the living room and set up all of the collectible trains on Christmas Day and called road call every ti...
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May 4, 2017 I woke up this morning to my favorite type of day, dark, cold, and rainy. I got out of my bed with the help of music by My Ch...
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Alone, nothing to see, hear, smell Nothing to do All alone for there is nothing Only darkness with a flash of light in the distance
3 comments:
Excellent! The way you structured your poem is very creative. The rhyming is a nice touch! :)
I really like how you made each line about the other person. It made me think of Liesel and Rudy, how it was all gone in an instant. Keep up the good work!
The rhythmic tone makes it light-hearted yet still very powerful.
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