The spray of the ocean
A cold breeze
The warm sun
A bird
The sun blocked out
Missing
What though?
The coldness of the ocean
The sun going away
Sinking
Floating
A nudge of an animal
Darkness
A rope
A net
Pulled
The sun
Flopping fish
A two-legged creature
A hand
A bag
Darkness
Light
The same hand
Another hand
A knife
Afraid
A market
Another hand
A home
My home
My warm sun-filled home
My safe home
My new
happy home
My great home!
3 comments:
Wow! I love how you shaped this poem. (I also love that it ends at your home!)
Is this a story about a fish? Sorry, I'm a little confused.
No, it's a story about a rock that got carved. It was hard to follow. I know.
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