Thursday, February 2, 2017

Do you remember? I do.

Do you remember? I do. When we ran through the beach sand air with our hair whipping back and forth. My eyes closed as I dived in deep beneath you. When I opened my eyes, through the murky water I saw jellyfish swirling around you. The water was like a refreshing break
from the hot summer days in July. When we sat next to the water, the waves crashed onto our feet. As we watched the sun set I didn't not want it to end. Do you remember? I do. The best day of my life.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love the imagery on this post! It reminds me of a day when I went to South Carolina and had fun on the beach!

Anonymous said...

This is so well written and I love the picture! My favorite part is "my eyes closed I dived in deep beneath you" because I can picture the image in my head.

Anonymous said...

Very good and descriptive, this reminds me of me. When our family went to the beach. I always get hit by waves.

Anonymous said...

I love this and how discriptive this is. I think the image is a great idea. Keep it up!

Anonymous said...

I love this and how discriptive this is. I think the image is a great idea. Keep it up!

Anonymous said...

This is super cool! I especially like the continous "Do you remember? I do." Where did you get the idea for this?

Devra said...

I love the picture a lot! I like the part when you said "I closed my eyes as he dived in deep beneath me." It's great keep it up!

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