First time hearing the news
I could hardly hold back the blues
He's not coming home
No matter how brave
He couldn't be saved
He's not coming home
As the bullets did rain
All they brought was pain
He's not coming home
No matter how hard I try
I wish I could have said goodbye
Dad's not coming home
11 comments:
This poem is strong, and very good.
This poem is deep yet simple. The emotion and pain behind it leaves the reader in thought.
This poem is so short and simple, but it explains soooo much. It is so deep, sad and emotional! Great job!
deep and emotional. i enjoy these short but very detailed poems. great work!
This poem is really short and simple, but has so much meaning. Good job!
I love this short poem! But very sad! :(
I'm crying, as you can see becaus your talking to me right now. This is so well written. I love how you repeated that line, it made it so powerful.
This poem is short, but sad. Good job
I love this so much!! Amazing job. I love how you repeat "He's not coming home" Amazing job!👍👍👍
I love this poem so much! It was short and sweet, but very sad. I love how you repeated the line.
This poem was very powerful. It was short, but sweet. I liked how you repeated the words " he's not coming home." I really want to know where you got the idea from. Great job!
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