Thursday, February 2, 2017
Only to find.........
As I was walking home from school, I decided to take a short cut through the woods. Seeing a white bassinet laying on the pathway, slowly looking around for the parent of this child. I walked over to the bassinet, only to find a white, bloody blanket. As I'm reaching for my phone in my back pocket. I hear footsteps slowly approaching me, turning around only to find........
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10 comments:
what is a bassinet?
What happens next? You drew me in, very good.
What a cliffhanger! Great use of the word "bassinet".
I really like the suspension you had at the end! Are you going to write another story linking to this?
Man! You should finish the story! Like I love the cliff hanger a lot and I want to know more. What the heak is a bassinet?
Such a good job....only a paragraph and I'm hooked...I want to know what happens next 🤔
Wow. That doesn't sound good. What was in the bassinette?
I love how you made the feeling of unknown fear seep into our minds. Not knowing is something that, either we get sacred, or are just curious. You made me scared, with the footstep part.
I can't wait to see what happens next, nice job with a hook. Hope there is a part two
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