Thursday, February 23, 2017

The Concierge's Dog pt.1


   My life was brilliant. I had the most wonderful life and I wouldn't have had it any other way. She loved me. A bond that couldn't be broken. Well, it was. She's gone. Gone. I never even imagined it being this way.
    She was cooking salmon one night, but left the burner on. It somehow started a house fire. I suddenly woke up one day; not in my comfy, little bed on the floor, but on the cold, wet cement.
   I heard people talking about how my owner was dead. Dead in a house fire. I feel like I am now.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is so sad! :( I wonder what my dog would think if I died?

Anonymous said...

This is so sad. If I died my dogs would get major anxiety.

Ms. Spengler said...

The only thing I can think of to say has been said twice already: This is so sad. OMG this is sooooo sad!!!!!!!! That's also why it's so good.

Anonymous said...

Great job! I loved how you described the difference in the bedding.

Anonymous said...

I loved how you worded it. It made me sooo sad.

Anonymous said...

I love the way that at first you almost couldn't tell it was the dog's point of view. But the end was a real heart jerker to show just how amazing dogs are.

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