He was dead. His body lay in the ground.
His plane had fallen like lead. Now he lay sound.
Their lives were exciting, not full of grief.
Now they shall live with those underneath.
A man full of pride, so shrivelled inside.
It was also sad, the way he died.
The lady, with her phone tight in hand.
She said, "Goodbye Brady, good luck with your band."
Everyone with people to see.
They will never be known to you or to me.
Every person, no time to adjust.
Ashes to Ashes; Dust to Dust.
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9 comments:
I loved your end line. All of my end lines never seem to move me the way yours did.
Very good! It's so creepy, morbid, and just plain perfect.
Oh my gosh, this is so sad. Very true though. I love your ending!
Very nice a little creepy but if that's what your going for than god job!
So sad! It made me tear up. Wow. Why does it has to be so sad?
Volpe
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It's confusing but it's cool just keep up the good work
My intention wasn't to make anyone sad. It was just to use the phrase Ashes to Ashes; Dust to Dust in a post. Sorry if I made anyone cry.
This story reminds my of the song lyrics, In the ground, his body lay. Also this story was very good nice job.
I really like the phrase "Ashes to Ashes; Dust to Dust" it's pretty cool.
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